Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2003/01/13
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Hi Richard:
Nice study in tones; I would try to do something with the hot spot in
the buoy on the left; it tends to draw undeserved attention. Try
holding your hand in the path of the sun (not as crazy as it sounds).
Cheers
Dante
On Wednesday, January 8, 2003, at 04:11 PM, Alastair Firkin wrote:
>> In my haste to get cracking with this year's PAW, I posted a poor
>> scan of an
>> (admittedly) not very exciting picture which needs all the help it
>> can get!
>>
>> Calmer counsels have prevailed, and I have re-scanned and re-posted,
>> as well
>> as adding alternates to my PAW site (though given that I only managed
>> to
>> complete 30-something weeks last year, this may be a tad optimistic!!)
>>
>> If you've a moment, please spare a glance.
>>
>> http://mysite.freeserve.com/paw2003/index.html
>
> although I like industrial photography, this image is too complex for
> me. The added shadows top left and the small area of sun lit metal
> ruin a good idea. The composition would have been stronger without the
> "sunny" influence IMHO.
>
> Cheers
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