[Leica] Tea Time

[abridge at gmail.com (Adam Bridge)]

I'd vote to crop the bottom of the first image. The negative space of
the train track doesn't do a lot for me - it only needs to be
suggested. Cropping the top down a bit will focus the image on the
departing train and the people on the platform. At least that's how I
see it - the image needs to be more linear.

The 2nd image is preplexing because of the rigid posture of the young
man so I find myself uncomfortable for him although I like the shot of
the young woman a lot.

This is a series I'd like to see hung so I could walk around and enjoy them.

Thank you

Adam


On 1/20/06, B.D. Colen <bd_colen@harvard.edu> wrote:
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