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Subject: [Leica] Re: IMG: This ain't no yellow brick road, laddie!
From: kleinp at BATTELLE.ORG (Klein, Peter A)
Date: Tue Dec 5 18:00:23 2006

Ted, points well taken.  And in that spirit, let me present a few
alternate versions, "special for you."  You may be right that #2 is
better, but I like the way the shadows lead to the subjects in #1, so I
used it for illustrations.

Here's what the camera saw: 
<http://users.2alpha.com/~pklein/temp/IrishOrig.jpg>

Here's what I thought I saw:
<http://users.2alpha.com/~pklein/temp/IrishGradient.jpg>

Here's what Ted thinks I saw:   :-)
<http://users.2alpha.com/~pklein/temp/IrishDesat.jpg>

Here's a "Wizard of Oz" approach to emphasizing the subjects:
<http://users.2alpha.com/~pklein/temp/IrishDesat2.jpg>

And here's a B&W with the digital equivalent of burning in the street:
<http://users.2alpha.com/~pklein/temp/IrishBWGrad.jpg>

These are the result of quick and dirty edits, most of them violate the
Nathan Wajsman Ethical Guidelines for Image Editing (which I normally
adhere to), and all would probably get me fired from the Charlotte
Observer, if I worked there, which I don't.  And it was fun. . .

Now, do any of these work?  And then, I'll get back to some probably
better images.

--Peter


> Peter my friend,
> The operative word here is..... "Snapped "!!!!!! :-( a file13 compared
to 
your regular photographs.

> We have all done this kind of quick re-action snap picture thing where
no 
matter what we try to do with it after the fact it really and truly just

doesn't work.:-( File 13 !

> It's a kind of "re-action to colour" more than content even though
both are 
influencing your "seeing senses."  The colour grabbed your eye and 
"click!":-(

> Your #2 crop is better because it allows the viewer to see into the
bar 
behind to the right, seems to make it balance slightly better. But even
here 
the people walking on the left are so distracting due to the lighting
they 
draw the eyes away from what should be two or one bright green person.

> On the left there are two men with a slight separation between, one
white 
shirt, one plaid, if you crop right through there & get rid of
everything to 
the left it helps because you get rid of the white eye catching shirt
and 
the guys white hair!  Or burn it down to a less distracting level. Then
the 
man walking toward you, dark shirt and glasses needs to be burnt down
also.

> But honestly it's a hell of a lot work trying to make something out of
a 
"grab shot" better left un-exposed as we see it here. Or at least as you

presented, "it ain't no yellow brick road."

> If I were to have posted it I think I might have asked something
like... "OK 
what are all the things wrong with this photo?" Or "What are all the
things 
that could've been done to make it better?"

> Either of those questions I'm sure would've evoked a great deal of 
interesting descriptions. :-)

> A last minute thought... maybe in B&W it might have worked better
because 
you relate to the shadows, "I really like the way the shadows point to
the 
subjects in #1."

> No offence intended as you know.

ted


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