Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2007/11/24
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Thanks for your comments, Ted, I agree. It was close, but as they say around here, that only counts when throwing horseshoes. You are right: I was standing near the unfolding scene with a 28mm lens on my M8. I didn't feel comfortable barging over to get a close up. It would have destroyed the dynamic (and perhaps my reputation if the adult got concerned and called for help). Even wide open, with the 28mm I could not throw the background adequately out of focus. My back was hurting and I didn't crouch down as I should have. I tried various crops but there is too much distraction in the scene. Here, btw, is the full frame before cropping: http://leica-users.org/v36/msg04036.html Phillipe, I did try it in b&w but it didn't feel right to me. I think the color is what would have made it a good shot if I could have got the rest of it right. Fortunately, as Ted points out, there will be another time. Practice practice practice! --Bob ===On 24 November 2007 Ted Grant wrote: > Bob Baron offered wisely: > >>>. I've tried several crops of this shot, including the > >> following, but I'm not sure the image has enough 'punch' (whatever > >> that is) to be a long time keeper: > >> > >> http://www.bobbaron.com/DC_Oct07/W_L1004200KidsLineV2.jpg > <http://www.bobbaron.com/DC_Oct07/W_L1004200KidsLineV2.jpg%3c%3c%3c%3c%3c%3c >> <<<<<< > > > > Hi Bob, > > You are absolutely right! > > > >>> but I'm not sure the image has enough 'punch' (whatever > > * that is) to be a long time keeper:<<<< > > > > It's close but sure doesn't win! It's not a keeper by any means. Actually > this type of photograph creates ten times or more effort screwing around > with it trying to make something out of it than it's worth. You're correct, > "there isn't any punch to it." Oh one can isolate segments with our eyes > looking at the photo and see the little girl on her tippy toes, the facial > expressions but not large enough to really make a significant photograph of > what's there. Because of the clutter. > > > > You saw the right moment, that's always the most important part. The making > it work comes from being in the right spot or the ability to move to a > shoot > position and angle to capture what motivated you. But you weren't in the > best position because of the distracting and physical aspects. > > > > There's a neat picture potential here if: > > > > 1: the cable wasn't across the frame, the young lady to centre right is > holding onto. > > > > 2: you bent your knees to a much lower angle (( Oh and how that hurts > trying > to get back up!)) :-) > > > > 3: Used a longer lens to capture only the two girls on the left in a > vertical composition and their face to face re-action which can be seen. > And > the tippy toes! WOW! That little bit of physical expression is part of her > anticipation at receiving an ice cream cone and of course comes from having > looked at all the different ice creams. > > > > A small but important part of the motivation to take the picture in the > first place. > > > > Never mind Bob the most important part of all? You saw the moment, it was > just unfortunate you couldn't get into the ideal shoot spot! :-( > > > > This kind of situation falls into the category of . "It's much better to > have seen the moment, than never to have seen at all!" Simply because if > you > don't see the moments in the first place you'll never shoot anything but > exposures of useless moments. And we all know you see very well, execute > very well and know when to "punch the button at the right time." From your > previous postings > > > > Just right this off as "just one of those things! " And for heaven sake > don't feel bad because you are not alone! Quite frankly if I had a dollar > for every moment like this I've shot in my many years I would be a very > rich > man! :-) Better luck next time. > > > > ted > > > >