Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2012/04/09
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]OK, I tweaked the image a little bit more. Thanks for looking. On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 7:07 PM, Richard Man <richard at richardmanphoto.com>wrote: > OH, I love constructive negative criticism too. Those are the ones that I > can learn from! > > > On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 6:28 PM, Geoff Hopkinson <hopsternew at > gmail.com>wrote: > >> What they said! >> My additional 2 cents is that the drummer, while having the best light >> looks rather mournful and static and he's not really in a compelling >> setting with the exception of the wall poster that Leo mentioned. too. >> Maybe some closer variants within the scene might have worked better? >> >> ps, you know that this critiquing thing works in all directions on >> everyone's posted pics huh?? I'm just sayin' ;-) >> >> >> >> Cheers, >> Geoff >> http://www.pbase.com/hoppyman >> >> >> >> On 10 April 2012 11:09, leo wesson <leowesson at gmail.com> wrote: >> >> > Richard, >> > >> > I like the light, the dark foreground and silhouettes of the foreground >> > musicians. The corner that you are shooting in to is kinda ugly, too >> bad >> > you couldn't have shot more toward the artwork on the walls or just >> toward >> > the window. I think I would also like to see some movement in the >> drummer, >> > hands in action. >> > >> > There is a nice little sub composition of the bass player against the >> > painting of the girls walking. Did you explore that shot at all? >> > >> > Leo Wesson >> > Photographer/Videographer >> > 817.733.9157 >> > www.leowesson.com >> > >> > >> > On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 7:46 PM, Richard Man < >> richard at richardmanphoto.com >> > >wrote: >> > >> > > So image threads rarely get critiques. Please take a shot of this. C&C >> > > welcome. Thanks! >> > > >> > > http://richardmanphoto.com/PICS/20120406-L1010011-Edit.jpg >> > > >> > > At the reception for the show that I am a a part of at the Art Ark >> > Gallery. >> > > >> > > -- >> > > // richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com> >> > > >> > > _______________________________________________ >> > > Leica Users Group. >> > > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >> > > >> > >> > _______________________________________________ >> > Leica Users Group. >> > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >> > >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Leica Users Group. >> See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >> > > > > -- > // richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com> > > > -- // richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com>