Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2014/06/24
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi David and welcome. I am going to guess that you were looking for comment on all of your gallery there. You likely may not see a lot of detailed critique in the LUG, at least on list. That doesn't mean that people don't look and enjoy though, especially as you establish relationships amongst the active posters. Your first shot of the frosted window pane is quite lovely content and works better than the second to my eye. I like the inclusion of the plain blue and the organic dark shape too. The kids photos are harder to comment as I think that these are more personal images? For me 'engrossed' works very well. I like the inclusion of the 'ghostly' cat behind. I'm not sure what you were going for with the light aircraft shot? As Doug commented, maybe more separation (in positioning) of the figures and aircraft cowl from the horizon would make it somewhat more three dimensional? Cheers Geoff http://www.pbase.com/hoppyman On 25 June 2014 07:09, W. David Craig <wdcraig at arctic.net> wrote: > Greetings All, > > I've been enjoying viewing your work, and thought I'd offer a few for > critique. Please be brutal. I'm trying to learn! > > http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/pastordcraig/20140616-L1000030.jpg.html > > Many thanks, > > David Craig > Fort Yukon, Alaska > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >