Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2002/06/19
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Tom,
I'd like to provide more feedback, but I could only echo Nathan. He seems
right on the money to me. I especially agree with him about the lovely quality of
the light in the street--well-spotted. Keep snapping.
Regards,
Michael Gerard
geeman1066@earthlink.net
Nathan Wajsman wrote:
> Tom,
>
> I hate to be harsh, but there are several things that I think could be improved:
>
> 1) SIZE. It is way too small, even by web standards.
> 2) Composition: there is too much dead space in the foreground
> 3) Cropping: the half garbage can in the lower left corner and the snout of a
> car coming in from the left, as well as the piece of the lamppost on the lower
> right all detract from the image.
>
> The light is very nice, which is the redeeming quality of this image, but it
> needs some work.
>
> Nathan
>
> Tom Smart wrote:
>
> > I don't have a home on my web site yet for a PAW, but I'll post an image for
> > critique here. Would like to hear your feedback.
> >
> > http://www.sleepytom.com/PAW/untitled-5.jpg
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Tom
> >
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