Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2005/04/14

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Subject: [Leica] This week
From: phong at doan-ltd.com (Phong)
Date: Thu Apr 14 05:23:06 2005

bill harting posted:
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/album93/R10_04_9A

I suppose it's all a matter of personal taste
and also what it is that you want to portray.

The wrist band could work; I would include
a bit more of the heart on the T-shirt;  that
would make it clearer that your focus is
not only the very beautiful face.

Given the crop at the top, I would also crop
the photo on the left; just a bit.

The hand gesture looks a bit unnatural;
it's almost as if she is rolling her ear.
(I think the hand is a bit too forward to suggest
that she is fixing ger hair; it also makes her
hand look a tad big compared to her face).

I am really nitpicking here, as it is still a very
pleasing portrait and belongs in a family album.
And such a lovely model to work with !

- Phong



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