[Leica] New Series

[sonc.hegr at gmail.com (Sonny Carter)]

Neil, you say you are  trying to create a certain type of look, but the look
is not apparent from the series, except the sepia.

I dunno, but I think you are shooting a little tight for my taste.

In six of the shots you lop off some heads, and in number two, the shot
would have been far more dramatic with the inclusion of the matador's feet.


Number four is out of focus, and doesn't add to the series imo.  Be ruthless
in your editing.

The best is number two, and seven, though he really needs a little head room
in the shot.

In number six the white rear end blocking our view of what I presume to be
the removal of an ear.  The mysterious hand in left frame pulls your eye
away from the action.

I think I would have shot everything a little looser giving me the option to
crop a little.

One other thing that would improve the shots would be to get lower in the
stadium so everything is not shot from above.  Lots more drama from a
straight-on view.

Hope this helps.


-- 
Regards,

Sonny
http://www.sonc.com
Natchitoches, Louisiana
USA


On Mon, Jul 14, 2008 at 11:18 PM, Neil Schneider <neilschneider2@yahoo.es>
wrote:

>
> Hi All...
> I have been off the list for a bit and am now returning and working on a
> new series of photos..
> I hope you have the time to take a look and comment on what you see..
> It is a series on bullfighting and i am trying to create a certain type of
> look with the photos..
> This is an on going project and just the beginning of the series...
>
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/People-And-Places_0/La+Corrida+de+Toros/
>
> Regards
> Neil
>
> Neil Schneider
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