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Subject: [Leica] Wednesday
From: nod at bouncing.org (Philip Clarke)
Date: Fri, 17 Apr 2009 03:27:06 +0100
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The composition is perfect, the framing and yet touching of the walker
and foot is spot on. The only thing that needs doing is a bit more
contrast as the whites aren't (white), dodging the man as his forearm is
lighter than his face and burn down the top left corner to extend the
shadow on the wall to the table, this will make the remotes more obvious
with the line of light coming in from the left. The bottom right could
be burnt in more and higher to the triangle of the walker.

Try it before you wtf me.

Susan Ryan wrote:
> I take care of my dad on Wednesdays now. The premise was respite for
> his wife but the ulterior motive was to get some one on one time with
> him before he goes.
>
> His two most hated devices, his walker and his "talker" have become
> his most important tools to interact with his world.
>
> C&C please - I only did some minor curves adjustments and mild
> sharpening in LR.
>
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/skalte/wednesday.jpg.html
>
>
> Sue
>
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