Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2011/08/01

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Subject: [Leica] after-dinner
From: imagist3 at mac.com (George Lottermoser)
Date: Mon, 01 Aug 2011 18:18:03 -0500
References: <CAGABCFFj-M2+0PaQ358ESThkfw2YJs9mwdsu0Vky83uh1LEpWg@mail.gmail.com>

On Aug 1, 2011, at 5:36 PM, mariela maglia wrote:

> after a few days with occupations, I am happy to return to the forum. I 
> hope
> your criticisms on this small study.
> 
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Mariela/estilo+worpswede/bcn_copa.jpg.html
> 
> or
> 
> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/Mariela/estilo+worpswede/bcn_copa_bn.jpg.html

Love the shadow forms in either
though more in the color.

I find the composition in both versions
to be way to right heavy;
and in need of cropping off the the left side
nearly to that first vertical (window?)
in the background;
in order to find balance.

Or some ad copy in the white tablecloth
as a another possibility.

;~)

Regards,
George Lottermoser 
george at imagist.com
http://www.imagist.com
http://www.imagist.com/blog
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