Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2014/09/21

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Subject: [Leica] Glamour
From: topoxforddoc at btinternet.com (Charlie Chan)
Date: Sun, 21 Sep 2014 10:09:53 +0100
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Hi Lluis

The burn at the top is fine as it helps to frame the image. It's jut that 
the bottom is a bit bright and unbalanced IMO

Charlie 

Sent from my iPhone

On 21 Sep 2014, at 01:14, Lluis Ripoll <lluisripollphotography at gmail.com> 
wrote:

> Hi Charlie,
> 
> Thank you very much for your advice, I?ve burned the top of the image, 
> maybe I?ve do it too much, I would try your suggestion,
> 
> Cheers
> Lluis
> 
> 
> El 20/09/2014, a las 12:58, Charlie Chan <topoxforddoc at btinternet.com> 
> escribi?:
> 
>> Hi Lluis,
>> 
>> The basic pic looks fine, as the composition (as usual) is excellent. The 
>> image is a bit darker at the top (maybe some vignetting if the image is 
>> cropped). Personally I would burn the lower corners a bit to balance this 
>> up. That will then focus the viewer onto the boys, the sign and the 
>> balcony.
>> 
>> Best wishes,
>> 
>> Charlie
>> 
>> On 20 Sep 2014, at 11:14, Lluis Ripoll <lluisripollphotography at 
>> gmail.com> wrote:
>> 
>>> Glamour, Sitges 1991
>>> 
>>> <http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/luisrq/Sitges/199103212_140519_0004LR5w2.jpg.html>
>>> 
>>> Leica M3 DS, Summicron Rigid, Ilford HP5
>>> 
>>> I?ll appreciate your c&c to this picture and what do you think I can do 
>>> to improve it, I?ve worked on it and I?m not completely happy, on the 
>>> other hand I want avoid high contrast and keep the smoothness. This was 
>>> shoot with my old Leica M3 DS already dead and my first Summicron Rigid, 
>>> it was a very nice lens but it was hazy and had fungus, in a light like 
>>> this one, late evening the lens showed very low contrast, what do you 
>>> think?. Thank you very much!
>>> 
>>> Saludos cordiales
>>> Lluis
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
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