Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2009/04/18
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]No wtf. The photo is indeed a little flat. It seemed OK when I was working on it, but posted I saw it right away. I'll experiment with your suggestions. LR is still new to me, and I haven't even ventured into PS yet. We'll see what I can do with the new tools. I've a late adopter. Haven't done film to any degree in years as my house has no space for a darkroom, and I live 30 miles away from the nearest decent film lab. So, I had to bite the bullet and buy an M8. Basically, I'm a beginner again. Appreciate the critique. Thanks. Sue On Apr 16, 2009, at 10:27 PM, Philip Clarke wrote: > The composition is perfect, the framing and yet touching of the walker > and foot is spot on. The only thing that needs doing is a bit more > contrast as the whites aren't (white), dodging the man as his > forearm is > lighter than his face and burn down the top left corner to extend the > shadow on the wall to the table, this will make the remotes more > obvious > with the line of light coming in from the left. The bottom right could > be burnt in more and higher to the triangle of the walker. > > Try it before you wtf me. > > Susan Ryan wrote: >> I take care of my dad on Wednesdays now. The premise was respite for >> his wife but the ulterior motive was to get some one on one time with >> him before he goes. >> >> His two most hated devices, his walker and his "talker" have become >> his most important tools to interact with his world. >> >> C&C please - I only did some minor curves adjustments and mild >> sharpening in LR. >> >> http://gallery.leica-users.org/v/skalte/wednesday.jpg.html >> >> >> Sue >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Leica Users Group. >> See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information