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Subject: Re: [Leica] Re: DAS PAW #4
From: Alastair Firkin <firkin@ncable.net.au>
Date: Fri, 18 Jan 2002 17:18:40 +1100
References: <B86B87B0.ACDB%dante@umich.edu>

>Done with regard to a small slice and the zipper - thanks for noticing that!
>
>Dante
>
>>  Dante:
>>
>  >> http://www.dantestella.com/photo.html
>>
>>  I like!  The flash isn't too objectionable.  Can see a shadow from the
>>  subject on the sofa behind her.  The bottom right corner is too dark.  I'd
>>  crop the top so that you can't see the bend in the sofa.  That would get rid
>>  of some unidentified stuff in the background, too.
>>
>>  Of course, maybe instead of the bottom right being too dark, the rest of the
>>  sofa is too light.  In any event, darken the zipper on the pillow that's
>>  floating around.  I'd also take a bit of the shine off of her nose and
>>  forehead.  Her ear it too bright.  Maybe her shoulder, too.
>>
>>  I really like her expression and her pose.  And the lighting on her hair.  I
>>  have a hard time posing people.  So I really admire others who can pull it
>  > off like you do.
>  >


I have to say that the "improvements" have made this a beautiful image.

Cheers
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