Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2003/11/18

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Subject: RE: [Leica] Pictures from the weekend
From: "B. D. Colen" <bdcolen@earthlink.net>
Date: Tue, 18 Nov 2003 15:17:13 -0500

Sam - I have to agree, and disagree. I disagree that these need cropping
because they are 'overly active.' It strikes me that part of what Brian
is showing is the mass of humanity here; the fact that the actions in
the foreground are being repeated ad infinitum in the background - and
that's powerful. I think that too often there's a feeling that all the
"extraneous" material should be cropped, when it isn't extraneous at
all, but rather helps tell the story. That said, I would like to see
more close-ups, probably tighter with a wide-angle rather than telephoto
closer. And, as I asked in a facetious manner before, where are the
shots of self-flagellation, etc., that would make these that much more
powerful?

B. D.

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Sent: Tuesday, November 18, 2003 2:41 PM
To: leica-users@mejac.palo-alto.ca.us
Subject: Re: [Leica] Pictures from the weekend


Brian, these are interesting as far as they go, but they could be made 
far more interesting if you had been more selective in what you included

in each frame (whether by getting closer, using a longer lens, or 
cropping). Many of the images suffer from being overly active without 
thoughtful composition: there are frame after frame of withering bodies 
with lots of extraneous background.

The use of captions would not have helped the composition, but at lease 
would have told us what we are viewing.


Sam S




brian stevens wrote:
> Hello all
> 
> Some new work from the weekend
> 
>  
> Ashura celebrates the martyrdom of Hassan and Hussein, Imam Ali's 
> sons. Ali was at  the origin of the first shism within Islam. Passions

> run high during these celebrations:  faithfuls flog themselves with 
> chains, or beat their chests.
> 
> 
> folder here
> http://www.leica-gallery.net/bds/folder-5788.html
> 
> Comments welcomed
> 
> Brian
> 
> http://www.briandavidstevens.com
> 
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