Archived posting to the Leica Users Group, 2009/08/23
[Author Prev] [Author Next] [Thread Prev] [Thread Next] [Author Index] [Topic Index] [Home] [Search]Hi Michiel, #1/ Her bra strap should've been tucked out of sight as it makes the eyes go directly to it because it's WHITE! #2/ I feel her shoulders should've been turned very slightly toward the camera to give a better body line look. Not a full 45 degrees, but a tiny amount to make for a very slightly fuller look. Boy not much, but some! #3/ The light is interesting as it has the slight appearance of shooting from the shadow-side. On her face. Yet has the light effect of portrait style... "Butterfly lighting." slight shadow under nose effect. Other than the above it's not bad, just make the slight corrections and it'll be, "very good!" :-) Dr. ted? :-) ----- Original Message ----- From: Michiel Fokkema <michiel.fokkema at wanadoo.nl> Date: Sunday, August 23, 2009 12:21 pm Subject: [Leica] Week 34 Ymke, playing around whit light To: Leica Users Group <lug at leica-users.org> > Hi , > > week 34 is here: > > http://michielfokkema.wordpress.com/picture-a-week/2009/week-34/ > > C&C welcome and Appreciated. > > Cheers, > > Michiel Fokkema > > _______________________________________________ > Leica Users Group. > See http://leica-users.org/mailman/listinfo/lug for more information >