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Subject: [Leica] Go on, Critique this please
From: richard at richardmanphoto.com (Richard Man)
Date: Mon, 9 Apr 2012 19:07:19 -0700
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OH, I love constructive negative criticism too. Those are the ones that I
can learn from!

On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 6:28 PM, Geoff Hopkinson <hopsternew at 
gmail.com>wrote:

> What they said!
> My additional 2 cents is that the drummer, while having the best light
> looks rather mournful and static and he's not really in a compelling
> setting with the exception of the wall poster that Leo mentioned. too.
> Maybe some closer variants within the scene might have worked better?
>
> ps, you know that this critiquing thing works in all directions on
> everyone's posted pics huh?? I'm just sayin' ;-)
>
>
>
> Cheers,
> Geoff
> http://www.pbase.com/hoppyman
>
>
>
> On 10 April 2012 11:09, leo wesson <leowesson at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> > Richard,
> >
> > I like the light, the dark foreground and silhouettes of the foreground
> > musicians.  The corner that you are shooting in to is kinda ugly, too bad
> > you couldn't have shot more toward the artwork on the walls or just
> toward
> > the window.  I think I would also like to see some movement in the
> drummer,
> > hands in action.
> >
> > There is a nice little sub composition of the bass player against the
> > painting of the girls walking.  Did you explore that shot at all?
> >
> > Leo Wesson
> > Photographer/Videographer
> > 817.733.9157
> > www.leowesson.com
> >
> >
> > On Mon, Apr 9, 2012 at 7:46 PM, Richard Man <richard at 
> > richardmanphoto.com
> > >wrote:
> >
> > > So image threads rarely get critiques. Please take a shot of this. C&C
> > > welcome. Thanks!
> > >
> > > http://richardmanphoto.com/PICS/20120406-L1010011-Edit.jpg
> > >
> > > At the reception for the show that I am a a part of at the Art Ark
> > Gallery.
> > >
> > > --
> > > // richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com>
> > >
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-- 
// richard <http://www.richardmanphoto.com>


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