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Subject: [Leica] Grandmother and the child
From: luisripoll at telefonica.net (Lluis Ripoll)
Date: Mon, 22 Jun 2009 23:31:02 +0200
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Thank you Ted, Jim, George, Mark, Ric. Jayanand and Simon.

All your comments have been certainly a big help for me, specially  
thanks to Ted's comment, a complete Master Class. Yes I want try to  
improve it, thank you very much again,

Saludos cordiales
Lluis


El 19/06/2009, a las 15:51, Ted Grant escribi?:

> Lluis showed:
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> Subject: [Leica] Grandmother and the child
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> Please, which one you like the best?
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> Hi Lluis,
>
> People part:
>
> I feel the one of the grand mother touching the child is the better.  
> Not
> only action of the hand, but there's a nice smile. Even though in both
> images the boy has an appearance of apprehension as though he's not  
> too sure
> about this lady? Grandma's smile helps with the hand on head, but  
> the kid
> doesn't look happy. No idea why, obviously little guys about his age  
> react
> differently and how often he visits with her can lead to all of the  
> above.
>
>
>
> Scene part:
>
> As soon as the screen opened the first thing I saw was the big tied  
> back
> white curtains right down the middle in both frames separating them.  
> Even
> more so in the hand on head photo, as it's slightly brighter. I also  
> realize
> one does not have the luxury of making the move to lessen or  
> eliminate the
> obvious. Or the moment would be lost, nor would you have had the  
> same full
> face line of looking at each other.
>
>
>
> A moment keeper for the family album. A quick happy snap, but not  
> quite the
> winning golden ring you so often capture. Having said that, none of  
> us are
> so perfect every frame is a smashing success!
>
> Of the two I prefer the hand on head mainly because of the action.  
> And it
> would improve slightly with a bit of burning in on the curtain.
>
> Cheers,
>
> ted
>
>
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